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You Poem

Tue Apr 11, 2006, 2:06 PM
This was somethin i wrote about my feelins that i have for my friend, hes a really great guy and i told him how i felt, but he wishes to be friends...

A few friends have read this and said is the best piece ive ever done, and one said it was cute...

~You~

Free my soul from all this pain,
Never ending lines of my broken heart
Am I to live a life unloved?
Or will you be my Knight in shining armour?

Standing on the jumping edge,
Thinking of all the good, the bad and plain funny times I had,
Most were my friends and then there was you
My secret wish of my heart,
The one I would give anything for

We are friends,
Not to say the least but you are my friend
Tales of my heart sang as you and I talked
So many times I wished to tell you all there is to me,
But my heart just seemed to get the best of me
Maybe yes,
Maybe no you might not think of me in that way

Standing on that jumping edge,
Closing my eyes to think
Sound of cars and lights blocked my thoughts
Do I jump?
Or should I go back to you?

When you found out I couldn’t look you in the eyes,
Seems my heart just broke from your words
My girlfriends think I should just talk to you,
And if I don’t they would kill me so
Again my heart gets the best of me,
And here I am talking to you once again
Will it be the same?
Or just some screwed up game?

Standing on that jumping edge,
Opening my eyes with my final thought
But to my surprise that thought is now something different
Looking back I see the hand that stopped me,
You were the one to stop me

Looking at your face of worry I step away,
Showing you I was truly sorry
You finally smile,
And now I see
No matter what,
I will always have someone looking out and loving me.

If anyone can relate to this, tell me coz its always good to know that people understand

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:iconphiac-yeu:
this it nat rite, if not whoops! add watch+

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:iconwodwod:
yeah this is nat.

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:iconbaka-lime:
Thank you very much for the favourites! ♥

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:iconbekki-baybi:
tashii !!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry, i haven't been on here in for freekin ever..
HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!!!!!
i love you so much ... x0x0x

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thanks for the fave! :heart:
much appreciated! :)
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not a prob ^^

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thanks for the fav

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:iconwodwod:
thanks for the welcome.....i do have a question its about submittin works....what do u class anime and cartoon drawins under?

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